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finished 2nd edition - Book I

11/19/2022

 
Hello All,

After nearly a year, the grueling task of doing some heavy editing on book I is complete. I think you'll find it easier to read and flows better, without changing the details of the story. The ProWritingAid software worked very well and helped me create better sentence structure and along the way I cleaned up areas that needed to be tweaked.

I hope you all enjoy it!
​Brian McLaughlin

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